Hey! Great elevator pitch. When I worked on mine, I kept thinking how I would feel if I was actually in a business conference presentation. It was weird to speak to a camera and record myself but it helped me improve my idea. I thought a lot about relating the audience, just like you did. You did a great job in giving the overall idea and selling it to the audience and explaining. Great work!
You had a great opening hook and I was immediately interested because I open my bank app literally every time I check out at Publix or Taco Bell or anywhere. It is frustrating to see money leaving your account and not even know where it is going. Your subscription organizing app sounds like a great idea and a good way to keep finances in order. I also like that you specifically addressed college students.
Hey! Great elevator pitch. When I worked on mine, I kept thinking how I would feel if I was actually in a business conference presentation. It was weird to speak to a camera and record myself but it helped me improve my idea. I thought a lot about relating the audience, just like you did. You did a great job in giving the overall idea and selling it to the audience and explaining. Great work!
ReplyDeleteYou had a great opening hook and I was immediately interested because I open my bank app literally every time I check out at Publix or Taco Bell or anywhere. It is frustrating to see money leaving your account and not even know where it is going. Your subscription organizing app sounds like a great idea and a good way to keep finances in order. I also like that you specifically addressed college students.
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